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Why make me wait, just to say goodbye?
Ten different ways I could end this night
Don't want this anymore, can't do this anymore
What keeps me here, hanging on this night?

How did I let them win?
Fuel me for my deadly sin

What makes me wait just to say goodbye?
Ten different ways to enjoy this knife
Won't see you anymore, lost feelings from before
Tear up my heart I cry deep inside
To end this night

Leave it all behind, I will
As I'm falling faster
Feeling fades, my bloodstained blade
Is my only master
I must burn to help me learn
Indulge my steel desire
Show them my crimson tears

I fall away, watch the bloody sky
Ten different ways I won't miss this night
The lies that you told, reason that I grow cold
The pain I feel will be gone this night
Through my knife

Leave it all behind, I will
As I'm falling faster
Feeling fades, my bloodstained blade
Is my only master
I must burn to help me learn
Indulge my steel desire
Show them my crimson tears

I'm gone...
©2005-2010 ~mygodsaredarkness
:iconmygodsaredarkness:

Author's Comments

actually a modification of Sugarcult's song Back To California, i was bored in an english class... so yeah

always alone
hannahb

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:iconblackdragon311:
Wow.. :)


My morbid side is always there. Even though through the happiness I sometimes feel, I can read something like this and yes I know this might sound odd. But I am smiling. Don't take that as a bad thing, jes me being me. Brought lots of memories back to me when I was really down and out. But, damn.. this was a very very awesome piece.



:+fav:


--- "What makes me wait just to say goodbye?
Ten different ways to enjoy this knife
Won't see you anymore, lost feelings from before
Tear up my heart I cry deep inside
To end this night " --- My favorite part. :)


Again, awesome job. Hope all is going alright. :hug:

--
I am the darkness still drifting through light. Forever shall I be consumed by the torment within.
Clubs: :iconTheWritersMeow:
:iconmygodsaredarkness:
thank you heaps!!! i no it makes me smile too **yay for the insane ppl of this world1!!** lol thanx heaps
always alone
hannahb

--
I never meant to be hurtful to you
(Please don't hate me)
All I can say, I did all I can do
(Please don't hate me for this)

I'm guilty enough without hearing it twice
(Please don't hate me)
You won't give it up but it's all in your eyes
(Please d
:iconblackdragon311:
More than welcome hun. :XD: And yay, I am not the only weird on out there. :hug:

--
I am the darkness still drifting through light. Forever shall I be consumed by the torment within.
Clubs: :iconTheWritersMeow:

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